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Dear Sir or Madam
posted by A on 2011/8/11 (Comics)
Ahh, Aldran, what monkey business are you up to now? I would be disappointed if any of you OOTS fans DON'T know where this is going...
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Me of little faith. Apologies - looking forward to the next update now especially!
For example, in the second panel, Kaal's "Are you sure, that looks like... [continued in panel 4] The kitchen" feels strange to me. I think it would have been better to separate this into two phrases, since half of it is a question and the other half is a statement - i.e. "Are you sure? That looks like... The kitchen."
I also think that the guard here would have benefitted from having his phrase cut off with a dash rather than an ellipsis, i.e. "Like, who man! The exit is that wa--". This, in my perception, would make the end of the sentence feel more abrupt, which it is (since he's being cut off by Kaal), as opposed to the fading out that an ellipsis seems to imply.
My third thing is very very very minor, but I kind of feel like Aldran should have put a comma in his sentence "Thank you Kaal", but that's not really a big issue.
One other thing is that I can't help but notice that Kaal feels a lot more snarky (and, by extension, smart) in this comic, such as his comment about the love letter (unless he genuinely thought it WAS a love letter, in which case I...don't know what to think about that) or his comment about how they wasted time not escaping.
All that being said, once again this was a good comic overall and I look forward to the two of you continuing to improve.
Gee, spoiler, much?
