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In fact, he probably is.
posted by A on 2011/7/13 (Comics)
Leaking Pen, with Dypen strip 2. Thanks most for the kind words. For the unkind words, sorry if you don't like the new strips. This is free entertainment, and if you are no longer entertained, I am sad, and I and Dyluth will do whatever we can to improve based on your feedback, buuuut. You can't please all of the people all of the time. But we try to please as many as we can.
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Unfortunately, I have no time at the moment, but soon a list shall be compiled of the ones I caught from Morrowind/Oblivion.
Patron, I've only played Daggerfall out of the series (though I think I wasted about 3 months of my life, real time, on that wonderful game) so I have missed most, if not all, references that Zarah may have put in. Point a few out for me?
I must admit, however, some disappointment... While I am rather impressed with your dedication to the original story and art, there has been one major omission which I feel quite detracts form the overall experience. There have been absolutely no references to the Elder Scrolls since the change in management. I'm afraid that, with this oversight, your otherwise flawless report is, shall we say, sub-par.
Your Deidicated Fan,
An Anonymous Patron
That said, I have one suggestion. The chat bubbles get a little hard to follow because they seem to be raised up a little higher than they should be and it makes them seem like they belong in the panel above them.
Also, great job. This is more like it.
The last panel's dialogue seems a bit off.
http://www.dandwiki.com and search for Psychic Turmoil (edit by your friendly neighborhood leaking pen. )
I think this is the best DyPen strip so far (out of two, but still...). One small criticism: Rallut's hair is slightly off. He is missing his beard and the little shading below his hair (see http://antiheroescomic.com/comic/219). I think the overall shape could be fixed up a little bit as well. But overall the writing and art is awesome.
Now Im going to be checking the page every day for an update, because there is a new plot twist! DARN!
Glad to see you're finding your feet so quickly! Keep it up Dyluth
hoots self for missing that in proofing::
sychic_TurmoilEven if you get all the details about the story and the charakters right, you still have to imitate the original syle of both. So even if you are a good writer or artist this doesn't count for too much - because you can't use your own syle. That seems to be a big obstacle for me.
And the fact that the two of you seperated writing and painting won't help with this. It is probably less work than to do both in one person but both of you have to imitate the original anti-heroes style.
In my opionion you are doing a great job. I can't see or feel much difference. And I don't think one would realize the change in the team if one wouldn't know it while reading.
Please keep up the good work and stay with the comic. The story seems to be a really good one for a web-comic and I would be sad if it was spilled "just like that" without any comics.
I was very sceptical about the plan to find somebody else to work on this comic. I didn't really thought it was possible.
So far you two proved me wrong. Thanks!
I'd dare say that you more than matched the mantle you picked up.
Keep up with this good tempo, and this comic's fanbase will soon live up to the times of Zarah's hayday!
Keep up the good work!